Wednesday, 24 September 2008

నా తొలి హైకూ

ఆరుబయట హొరెత్తిస్తూ,
నా మదిలో అల్లరి చేస్తూ,
నీ తలపుల వాన!

7 comments:

Trinath Gaduparthi said...

bagundi !
Manchi concept.

kiran said...

babai
hike ki ee padyaniki ki koncham sambandam antha correst ga unnatu ledu :)

Sri Vallabha said...

@ gutta

mama, haikoo ante salary hike kaadu ra. 'haikoo' is a form of poetry with just three lines :)

Ravi Harsha said...

Hello Vallabha,
nuvvu ilaa saahityam lo kuda ande vesina cheyi ani naku telidu. Nenu ika regular reader :-)

Sri Vallabha said...

@ ravi: manadi antha pedda cheyyi yemi kaadu le, i am just a beginner.

Purnima said...

Good one!

bvamkris said...

Looks like you will never get over whoever it is!